Show Don't Tell

What is it?

In this revision game, we'll put our characters into motion to transform moments of telling into lively scenes. You can use the way a character eats a sandwich, packs their backpack, or wanders through a museum to show us everything we need to know about how they feel. Let's explore practical strategies for adding emotional depth and bringing our scenes more fully to life.


To transform moments of "telling" into well-crafted scenes that can spring to life in a reader’s mind.


Direct link: https://youtu.be/OamiEwwJOUo

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